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by Ron Kurtus

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Screen Paradigm What happens to the turning points in a short film? UK
Motivations How can I test my writing ability? USA
General I need a free English course Egypt
Reader Interest Writing a fiction book USA
Screen Paradigm Writing a screenplay treatment USA
General Need to write up meeting notes Australia
Get Paid for Fiction Wants to become a film director USA
Book Report Material helpful but needs more details USA
Screen Paradigm What happens into the second act of a script? USA
General How to proofread USA

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What happens to the turning points in a short film?

Topic: Screen Paradigm


November 5, 2007

Regarding turning points in the plot at page/minute 27 and 87

What happens if the film is shorter, e.g. 100 pages/minutes. Is it proportional? (100/120 x 27 = page 25. 100/120 x 87 = 7)


Joe - UK



To a degree the turning point is proportional to the length of movie or television show. Watch half-hour television shows to find the turning points. Often they have a commercial break at those points. Likewise, try to identify the initial turning point in various movies.

Of course, this is not a hard rule that it must be at specific times or pages, but it is a good rule of thumb, used to get and keep the viewer's attention and interest.

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How can I test my writing ability?

Topic: Motivations


October 10, 2007

How can I test if my writing ability is improving? Do I have pass some examination to you?

Angel - USA



The more you write, the easier it should be for you. As your ability improves, the words seem to flow better. Note that you should always make sure your spelling an grammar are correct.

Carefully read your material yourself, putting yourself in the role of a reader of lower education than you. Is it easy to read? Can you understand the ideas?

It is good to get someone else to read what you have written to get an honest evaluation. If they have trouble understanding what you have written, then you need to work on that.

Remember that writing is communicating your ideas to another person.

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I need a free English course

Topic: General


September 4, 2007

plese i speak a little english i need a free english course to advanc myself

can you send to me this course, please?

thak you advance

mido - Egypt



I am sorry, but we do not offer a course in English.

But if you go to our Science section, there are a number of lessons marked "audio" that you can read while listening to the words:

Also, you can read our Famous Speeches while listening to the words:

Reading while you hear the words spoken is a good way to learn English better.

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Writing a fiction book

Topic: Reader Interest


August 10, 2007

Dear school of champions, my name is David vega. I started writing a fiction book a few days ago, And I dont know if I have to show it to an editor, or just keep writng until I finish my book and then show it? I am hoping that you may tell me so that I may know what I have to do. Thank you very much




To sell a fiction book, you usually need to go through a literary agent, who will then take your material to publishers. You can also approach publishers yourself. In either case, you first need to send a query letter, stating in a paragraph or two, what your book is about and perhaps something about your background. You could include a one-page summary of your story.

If there is some interest, you can send a sample chapter to show your writing style and ability. In the meantime, you continue to write your book.

When you finish your book, you can hire an editor to go over it and fine-tune the writing. If a publisher has shown interest, they will use their own editors.

Get the book "The Writer's Handbook" in a bookstore or from the library for a listing of agents and publishers, as well as articles on selling your work.

Best wishes on finishing and selling your fiction book.

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Writing a screenplay treatment

Topic: Screen Paradigm


March 27, 2007

You state that a "treatment" is a few page synopsis of a screenplay if I am correct. Also that its possible to sell a script with just a treatment. After I write this, where would I begin to shop for a buyer. Thanks for your time.

John - USA



I met a fellow who was able to get a job as a mail boy in one of the movie studies. (Actually, a plum job.) He got to know one of the producers and showed him a 1-page story synopsis. The producer liked it and started buying his story ideas at $6000 a pop. Although, his ideas must have been good, he also was able to get it to the right person.

Typically, you need an agent to sell your screenplay to a producer. You have to go through a process to get an agent. You pitch your story idea in one or two sentences. Then have a 1-page synopsis. If he is interested, show a treatment of up to 10 pages. If you have the full screenplay available, all the better.

The agent will then go through the same process to pitch and sell your script to a producer. But it is possible that they may like the idea but not your script. Even then, you can make out.

Note that before submitting a screenplay to anyone, it is a good idea to register it with the Writers Guild of america:

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Need to write up meeting notes

Topic: General


March 12, 2007

at work i need to be able to write minutes up and write letters to different business for upcoming projects and incvite them to join. have problems putting it all together what can i do.

Gina - Australia



Writing up minutes requires that you are able to take notes during the meeting. You need to write who was there, and who brought up certain points. You have to get a method of abbreviating things with key words, because you can't keep up writing everything. After the meeting, the key words should help you recall what was said. Keep things short and simple.

Usually, letters to other businesses have what they call "boiler plate" information that is sent to everyone. Look at old letters that were sent on a similar subject to get an idea of the words and format used in each. You should have an outline or some notes from your boss concerning the specifics of the letter.

I hope these ideas help.

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Wants to become a film director

Topic: Get Paid for Fiction


January 19, 2007

To begin with, my name is Jonathan and I'm eighteen-years-old. For as long as I can remember, I have always wanted to be a film director. I'm going to be graduating from high-school soon and college seems very far from reach. I have decided to pursure this dream one step at a time. I strongly doubt that I will graduate one day and become a film director the next. Even though I strongly have my sights set on being a film director, I have decided to recieve a career as a writer first. I am full of ideas that I know people would love to hear about. I was wondering if you could give me some information on how I would go about writing and publishing a book. I would like to know about all of the benefits, such as the money I could make. This is the only thing in my life that I know I'm good at without having any doubt. I would like to thank you for your time and I hope to hear from you as soon as possible.

Jonathan - USA



If you've always wanted to be a film director, why change directions now? Getting a book published is not easy, and making a lot of money from it is rare. How many successful authors can you name? Now compare with how many successful film directors you can name.

If you had a dream of being a film director, go for it. You don't have to go to college, but you should try to take some courses that relate to acting, writing, and directing. This can be done in night school or at your local community college.

Get involved with a local theatrical group. Find out who the director is and tell him that you are interested in becoming a director too. You can help them in their play production as an actor, stagehand or assistant to the director. This is a way to get firsthand knowledge of what it takes to be a director.

Also you can get up a group of friends and create your own short videos. You can post them on YouTube while improving your skills in the trade. Check into public access television in your community. You might be able to put on a half hour production that you direct.

Look into the biography of Steven Spielberg to see how he got started in the business.

This should all keep you pretty busy on developing your film director skills, as well as to help you make connections for you to achieve your dreams.

I hope these ideas help, and best wishes in becoming a film director.

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Material helpful but needs more details

Topic: Book Report


December 30, 2006

this website helps us about the plot, but i think in a main book report, you have to give description witht he characters, the setting and much more, this website could be improved but it helped me alot!! thanks

sana - USA



Thanks for the feedback. The book report program is pretty simple right now. We'll follow your advice and upgrade it to include more about characters setting and such.

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What happens into the second act of a script?

Topic: Screen Paradigm


November 6, 2006

What happens into the second act, say from page 30 to page 60. Page 60 is the midpoint, what should more or less happen at that point. From page 60 to the end of act 2, what happens during that stretch? Thanks. Your article has been very helpful.

Mark - USA



It is a time for developing the characters and their relationships, as well as for developing the plot.

You can study well-plotted TV shows to see what happens at the various points. Even a half-hour show can be split into the various dramatic parts. But often they build up until a commercial to keep the viewers on the edge of their seats.

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How to proofread

Topic: General


September 30, 2006

I HAVE written a short storie and a poeam and I am not sure how to proofread

sandra - USA



The very first thing is to use Word or your word processor to check the spelling and grammar. A good trick to use in proofreading is to start from the bottom and scan upwards through the poem or story. That way, you will see errors you made. Finally, it is good to have someone else read it to make sure their are no mistakes and that things make sense.

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